Thursday, August 14, 2008

More on Story Revisions...









... And sometimes the answer is right in front of your face. It's just not what you expected.

5 comments:

christine mercer-vernon said...

talk about something in your eye!! ;) i like these two recent drawings...are they for something in particular?

Eric Orchard said...

Beautiful drawing! I love the long format! All of recent stuff has been great.

Jennifer said...

Yes, Christine-- for a project I've been working on for a while... but it needs a lot of revision. So, more baby steps!! I wanted to do up some samples, though.

And thanks, Eric! The sketch from yesterday and today make me think of your recent post about being critiqued-- I can relate! In my case it was very constructive... made my stomach hurt a bit, yes, but after that I could see some excellent points. Growth is challenging sometimes, I guess! :-)

Frank Gardner said...

Ha! I think that one is great. It can be read on lots of different levels. I don't know what the story is, but I like them.

Jennifer said...

Thanks Frank! The story is complicated... probably too complicated for a picture book, which is why it might end up being two different stories. Sorry to sound so cryptic! I'm still figuring it all out...